论文修改意见模板英文

It the widely using of robots will bring our human beings danger,【这句话不对，是想用it引导主语么？是要做陈述还是提出疑问？有三种表达，(⊙o⊙)哦,根据后面的意思，(我觉得你是想说：机器人的广泛应用会给人类带来危险么？因为使用了will)就是第三种】：1.It is the widely use of robots that bring our human beings danger.(It is 强调) 2.Is it the widely use of robots bring our human beings danger ？ 3.Is the widely use of robots will bring our human beings danger? 【用use就行，use有名词的意思】use your own view and thoughts on it【on it 可以删掉】The issue of whether or not widely using of robots has a positive influence to society has been hotly disputed in public【whether的用法不对（建议专门看下语法书讲whether的），应该这样说：whether the widely use of robots has a positive infuence on society（have an influence on 是固定搭配，不用to）】bring plenty of benefit for society【bring...to...(给/为...带来...)】present my own view about this phenomenon. 【view on sth 】The advocates of widely using of robots hold a strange belief 【of widely...robots删掉，支持者就可以了，读者可以看懂】some danger works, 【dangerous 是形容词，danger是名词，work不可数名词：some dangerous work】which strengthen the security rate【strengthen的意思是加强，而这里说的是安全率，应该用提高：increase，raised...或是说ensure the safety of workers...】Hence, it can be concluded that robots provide a lot of advantages for the society. 【这句话表明，The advocates 的观点是正确的，本段开头就不应该用strange来评价他们的观点 ，另外我觉得可以改成：we can get the conclude that... it can be 用的有点频繁了，多变换句式增强文章的可读性。】negative effects for society【effects on sth 固定搭配】The reason is that some manual workers【用because就可以了，这个这个，感觉你的文章。。有点僵硬，模式化了，哎，写出漂亮文章的确很难啊，我也探索ing...与君共勉！】The fact that handcraft is one of the traditional culture, which can represent the history of country, has been underestimated in public.【我的修改是，the fact that handcraft,as one form of expression of the traditional culture,represents the history of a country,has been underestimated by public.】its still make a lot of demerits, which may lead our life become more detrimental【1.it still make... 2.我的修改：which may threat the healthy development of our society.】一些词:widely ,lead,suppose,view,demerit……还有一些句式 xxx is that xxx ,the fact that ……频繁出现，就是那种这句出现了，下句马上又出现了的，这种不好，不是说不能用个第二次。还有就是介词的使用，固定搭配什么的，应该加强一下。有不对的地方，楼主指出来啊~~~

简明扼要，提纲挈领。英文题名方法①英文题名以短语为主要形式，尤以名词短语最常见，即题名基本上由一个或几个名词加上其前置和（或）后置定语构成；短语型题名要确定好中心词，再进行前后修饰。各个词的顺序很重要，词序不当，会导致表达不准。②一般不要用陈述句，因为题名主要起标示作用，而陈述句容易使题名具有判断式的语义，且不够精炼和醒目。少数情况（评述性、综述性和驳斥性）下可以用疑问句做题名，因为疑问句有探讨性语气，易引起读者兴趣。

(1)、简要介绍你的稿件；

(2)、介绍你对修改稿所作的revision；

(3)、感谢reviewers的意见，并说明已经回答了审稿人提出的问题。

2.Response to reviewer：其实就是在一个文档里，逐条地、认真地回答审稿人提出的每一个问题（important），届时上传修改稿时，也将esponse to reviewer作为独立的文档上传。

SCI文章修回的COVER LETTER模板如下：Dear Dr.XXXX,Thank you very much for your letter and advice. We have revised the paper, and would like to re-submit it for your consideration. We have addressed the comments raised by the reviewers, and the amendments are highlighted in red in the revised manuscript. We hope that the revision is acceptable, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

With best wishes,

Yours sincerely,XXXXXX================================================================（换页）We would like to express our sincere thanks to the reviewers for the constructive and positive comments.Replies to Reviewer 1XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXReplies to Reviewer 2XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXReplies to Reviewer 3XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

注意：

1、 对于审稿人的建议一定要礼貌地回答；

2、不要利用不同审稿人之间的不同意见相互辩驳；

3、回答不利的意见，一定要有分度，不能有较真和抵触的想法；

4、无论如何都需要对编辑和审稿人致谢。

这个是会议论文审稿意见的评分情况吧，首先恭喜你，这篇会议论文已经被接收了。翻译如下：================按评分标准回答下列问题 （1 - 7 分，1分为低，7分为高）摘要的质量好坏： 5与本会议的相关性： 5引言和写作动机： 5“先进性”的阐述： 6对自己贡献的原创性和描述： 5 对结果的表述： 4 结论和展望： 5可读性，英文的质量： 4图表的质量： 5格式的质量： 4论文整体的推荐建议 (1 - 7 分，1分为强烈拒绝接收，7分为强烈接收）作为：一般的论文： 5